Monday 24 March 2014
swimming sports
I was sitting on the chairs waiting for someone to call me up I was feeling intense waiting for my race. I got ready I grabbed a flutter board and bursted off I was already halfway through the race I was in the lead until rico and te-putu passed me as I was just about to claim my victory. I got my yellow shiny stick it was worth 2 points. I went to mr webb and i handed in my stick he marked 2 points and i thought to myself who knows maybe I will come 1st next time...
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A good story Cody. You managed to capture a moment in time really well. I think you could edit in some more about the middle of the race and near the end. We will work on that tomorrow.
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